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She stares down curiously at the blood that drips from the knife she holds in her hand. drip, drip. She turns it over and over and over again. Glinting metal, a bloody red. Blood. She laughs as she sees the man lying still and unmoving at her feet. Hm. This just got curiouser and curiouser. Softly, she giggles. Alice in Wonderland. Hums softly. She pokes at the body with her toe. Leans down and stares into the face, eyes wide open and frozen with a look of eternal fear. She smiles, delighted. Starts to sing softly, still staring into the dead, dead face. Brushes the hair back, gets blood on her fingers. She brings it up to the light, squinting a little. And lets out a laugh. Another. And another, till the knife plunges into her own body and doesn't stop, doesn't stop, doesn't stop...
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13 comments:
wow amazing reminds me of the scene when serge stabs kid and had a squint on his face!!!
Not deep enough. *frowns skeptically*
I like the psychopath =D
I love her laughing for murdering him.
*gives evil laughter*
Ubaid, that was downright rude. You don't want us to critically analyse writings, do you now?
Phir tum aur Ali kaho ge ke mjhay maukah chahiey kisi ki taking karnay ka.
Maryam, the emotions were beautifully expressed and definitely made sense! :)
Keep writing.
'Curiouser and curiouser' and the constant laughing - you got me freaked, lady. Good work.
@maryam
sorry about that
@anushay
gee you are right! it was rude, i realised it when i read it now....
Ubaid, you didn't have to delete the comment, I didn't mind it that much =|
Bitter Truth, Marina: Thank you!! <3
@Mayram
nahi but it was unlike me naah, i was waisey hi in bad mood, toh thats why posted that... i read this thing again... and well i liked it this time honestly.... per the girl kind of sounds psyco!!
Now why can't i get a nice Psyhco girl like that... :P
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