It took over her mind, her breathing. Suffocating, can't breathe, can't breathe, can't
breathe. Coated the back of her throat with the metallic taste of fear. And blood. Her eyes darted, here then there, then back again. Oh, God, oh,
GOD. Her thoughts circled frantically around and around and around and
WILD, to get out,
escape, inhale, breathe,
GOD THINK! Her nails scraped the walls, drew blood, left torn bits of flesh and nail and smears of the dark, dark red on the blank, gray wall. Prison. Her prison. Only in her mind? She didn't know. She couldn't understand. Captive, prisoner, hostage, inmate. Get out,
get out...
... Can't. Just can't. A moan escapes her blue-tinged, dry lips. Her breath heaves. Rasps, the labored breathing of a cornered animal. Defenseless, hopeless, God, so small. She drags herself to the corner of her prison and rests her head back against the wall. A tear slides down her white, white cheek. Hopeless, hopeless. Can't get out. Imprisoned, forever and ever and ever...
... Only in her mind?
24 comments:
loved it !
Really? Thanks XD
Chaotic but beautiful...
different :)
Lonely, thankyou =)
Anon, EXACTLY.
That's a beautiful prose-piece. Why dont you try writing a 'short-story' ?
You should really write short-stories! It was amazing :)
I have, sort of. A mini-mini short story, lol. Check out the prose tag.
W-A-O-W!
Very impressed. Seriously. Really good stuff.
Maham, Yawar: Thankyou!!
I just read it again. I'm impressed how you've done this.
LOL. Um. I have no idea what to say.
Aab itna bhi acha nhi hai.. :P
Say thank you and promise me you'll write a book?
Sarrtay nai hain =P
Yawar, LOL I could never be that good.
Im a very jealous person... And Im jealous of ur writing....
Ye mazaak tha?
I think this poor soul is hitting on you. He wants your number. Give it to him...
Make his day...
Somehow i have this tendancy of hitting on girls without me even knowing it... :P
Hahaha Yawar, him or you? =P
Lonely, koi baat nai, hota hai =P
Cheers..:P Rock on... And keep writing..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ayimKtWlmms
Listen to this song... You might get inspired to write some more....
Awwww...you sound sweet, Meryam. But I don't really hit on girls.
Anyways, I'm short, fat and ugly, so I spend my day under my shell.
Lonely Perverted Soul even has green eyes. Anyways, khaani khatam. No more now. Baas =)
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